Day off

Luis and I woke up at eleven o´clock, then we had breakfast, later we went to the shopping centre by bus,
next we went to Mcdonalds and Poundland where we bought our meal, tand we ate in a Park, but we went home because we got bored, at home Elena and Concha went to sleep and Luis did a picture for his cap, and I saw a film in my laptop, then we had dinner.
Next Concha, Elena and I talked, and then I went to sleep.

*Carlos, avoid using "then" so much and include full stops.